Wednesday, January 23, 2013

The Huge Snowman - Easton

This is the note that we sent to Principal Rosell from the kids school. He had a extra credit "Writing Challenge" to do on his trip. Here is the note that we wrote to his teacher and the story as well. It was sent on January 7th, 2013 (Fiji time).
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Mr. Rosell -

Please accept this story below from Easton Kreshel.  He is currently in Fiji on an extended holiday with independent study, but wrote a story as a part of the winter break Writing Challenge.  He did write this story out on paper first, but we helped him type it up so that we could get it to you in California.  Easton is in third grade in Mrs. Schwartz's class and will return to school on January 23rd.


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The Huge Snowman

Once upon a time there were two kids named Snowy and Cho. They loved snow. But there was a bully that did not like snow. One Christmas, Snowy and Cho built a giant snowman. Cho and Snowy were in front the bully, who was behind the snowman. The bully kicked the snowman and the snowman began rolling down the hill. The ball of snow was rolling down the hill gathering more snow and was about to suck up the whole city.

Everybody ran away, except for Snowy and Cho. They had parents who were scientists, so they knew what to do.  They ran home and got a big vacuum.  They used the vacuum to suck up the big ball of snow from the snowman and chunk it up into little pieces and threw the little pieces of snow out.   Everyone in the city was happy and they made Snowy and Cho's Dad the  new president because of his kids. Their mom was First Lady because of her kids. And most of all, the kids were famous because of themselves.

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